So here's Lambda from Umineko as my half of my art trade with *dwendeadi. I asked him to draw Coldplay.
I hate anime. Deer lord. So many details for no bloody reason and what the hell is up with those bloody eyes?! Messed up a lot on here hair and glove especially. I like splatters and drips. Scanning wasn't even because it was bigger than the scanner so go figure. Might cut and re-scan.
What is Awesome~! I really like the colour in this it is so bright and playful. I like how you mixed some media as well. The hand is very well done. her eyes just scream "play with me" this is a very adorable piece. I really like the background! It adds a nice touch and brings focus to the girl. the way you shaded is very subtly but it is very and it really gives the piece a little bit more life than it would with just flat colours. Originality is superb!
Suggestion: I think what could have been nice is adding her other arm, It would really add to the piece and break of the piece very nicely.
First off i would like to note how colorful and fun this piece looks. Some items that i would like to praise you for is how crisp and clean the lines of the drawing appear. Another is how well everything seems to blend with out making it look choppy or uneven. I really admire the mix of colors and the sparks of creativity that is put into your artwork. One thing that seems to bother me though is that the hand's shadows do not blend properly and look a bit rushed, however it could have been intended to look like that.
overall this piece has 100 percent originality and fills the viewer with a sense of playfulness.
This is great! I have no idea why you hate anime, you're so good at drawing it :3 The only two things I can pick out that could use a little more attention are 1) a tad more shading, since it's so extreme on the arm but not present anywhere else and 2) Some of your pen lines are a bit shaky. If you make quick strokes that flow with the way your wrist pivots, it's easier to get a smoother line. :3 Hope that helps ^^
I really like the colour in this it is so bright and playful. I like how you mixed some media as well. The hand is very well done. her eyes just scream "play with me" this is a very adorable piece. I really like the background! It adds a nice touch and brings focus to the girl. the way you shaded is very subtly but it is very and it really gives the piece a little bit more life than it would with just flat colours. Originality is superb!
Suggestion:
I think what could have been nice is adding her other arm, It would really add to the piece and break of the piece very nicely.
One thing that seems to bother me though is that the hand's shadows do not blend properly and look a bit rushed, however it could have been intended to look like that.
overall this piece has 100 percent originality and fills the viewer with a sense of playfulness.
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